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+++ b/paper.md
@@ -6,18 +6,27 @@
 ## goals
 
 - focus on content/writing
+- version control
 - next generation communication
   - avoid emails with attachments, right?
   - reviews!
 - automated publishing
+  - high quality typesetting
 
 # tool overview
 
 ## markdown
 
-- easy to learn, read and write
-- no distractions to procrastinate
-- no fiddling with WYSIWYG
+- **easy to learn**, read and write
+- no distractions to *procrastinate*
+- inline LaTeX if needed: $a^2 + b^2 = c^2$
+
+```markdown
+- **easy to learn**, read and write
+- no distractions to *procrastinate*
+- no fiddling with `WYSIWYG`
+- inline LaTeX if needed: $a^2 + b^2 = c^2$
+```
 
 ## git
 
@@ -31,16 +40,26 @@
 - communication: discussion and reviews
 - continuous deployment to e.g. cloud storage
 
-## pandoc
+## pandoc #1
 
-- render markup source to high quality PDF
-- markup usually less powerful than LaTeX, but inline LaTeX can be used
-- supports templates e.g. for different journals or iDiv branding
+- render markup source ...
+  - usually **Markdown**
+  - markup less powerful than LaTeX
+  - but inline LaTeX can be used
+- ... to high quality target
+  - PDF via LaTeX
+
+## pandoc #2
+### supports templates
+
+- different journals
+- iDiv branding
+- draft branding
 
 ## make
 
 - automate build
-- create images with visualization tools (see below)
+- use visualization tools
 
 # optional tools
 
@@ -49,12 +68,12 @@
 - graph visualization language
 - define flowcharts with code
 - **dot** handles rendering
-- use **make** to automatically build
+- use **make** to build
 
 ## R scripts
 
-- turn scientific computing results (CSV) to charts
-- use **make** to automatically build
+- CSV2charts
+- use **make** to build
 
 # branching model
 
@@ -68,16 +87,47 @@
 
 - same paper text
 - different themes for journals
-- journal-themes via sub-module --> make them reusable
+- journal-themes via sub-module
+  - make themes reusable
+
+# workflow
+
+## workflow #1
+
+write paper in Markdown
+
+## workflow #2
+### discussion / reviews
+
+- issues
+- merge requests
+- commit comments
+
+invite collaborators: send link to GitLab
+
+## workflow #3
+### continuous deployment
+
+- deploy PDF to cloud storage
+- draft watermark template if commit not tagged
+- send others link to PDF in cloud storage
+
+## workflow #4
+### templates
+
+- write templates across teams
+- use git sub-modules to include
+- share with all@idiv / world
 
 # misc
 
 ## helpful commands
 
-Better diff command for text:
-
 ```bash
+# better diff command for text:
 git diff -w --ignore-blank-lines --word-diff
+
+# watch source and build if changes
 watchexec -w paper.md -- make paper.pdf
 ```
 
@@ -85,3 +135,23 @@ watchexec -w paper.md -- make paper.pdf
 
 - to wrap or not to wrap
 - true paragraph-based diff
+- we don't have solid CD yet
+- can CD deploy to nextcloud share?
+- review-able PDF template
+  - link to join discussion at every paragraph
+
+# your turn
+
+## discussion
+
+- what do you use today?
+- what annoys you the most?
+
+## let's use it
+
+- install tools
+- set up git project
+- convert existing stuff to markdown
+- build with pandoc
+
+# EOF